Rough draft of final scene

Complications that arose during the practice:
Firstly we ran out of time during the shoot; we were supposed to at least complete rough drafts of two scenes of our opening, but in the end only managed to complete one. This was due to time wasting and the fact that two of the people in our group had other commitments during that afternoon. However now I believe we  have a better handle on this scene and don't think we'll experience the same amount of time wasting as in this one.
                Another issue that occurred during the shoot was that Dan didn't suit his acting role as well as could be hoped. He had a hard time saying his lines like a human being and so we have decided to change the actor that will be playing this role to Jamie Fraser Smith, who has had previous acting experience (also he has a dog).
                A third issue was that the tracking shots and pans weren't very smooth and so some new method will need to be devised to make them better. However there is little we can do to mend this.