Due to the feedback we received during our presentation of our idea to the class, we have decided that it is necessary for us to add an extra scene to the extract in order to avoid the piece looking like a concluded story. In this scene the murderer will be displayed as a normal everyday individual and will be identified as a man of a normal profession by some local people or person. An idea that I have is that a casual dog walker will walk by the murder as he is walking through the woods, the murderer will be in high spirits and betray nothing as the dog owner broaches the topic of the missing detective. This will all happen after a main title which will occur when the murder happens. To link the murderer and the everyday version of the murderer we have decided that he will be whistling the same tune as he murders the victim as he is when he meets the dog walker or possibly when he walks away from the dog walker. As well as this the things the murderer says will hint at his alter-ego.
(We later decided that this wasn't that important and preferred to make the character more mysterious)
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